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Indeedy. I recognize the silhouette too. Anyone heard of Di Gi Charat?

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"grumble grumble stinkhead grumble grumble poop-for-snot grumble grumble dick" -Ryu Gaia

"Puhi gave the people food and made the seaweed farm."

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Suprise sudden twist! Majesty is actually Deltan in disguise!
lol I am not creul!

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[10:09:03 PM] Kiri: Gah, What?'s poor spelling is contagious!
[10:09:18 PM] Kiri: It is spreading throughout the lands of Draconis. Soon we shall have an epidemic on our hands.
[10:09:28 PM] CompleteZero: Worse than the banana plague too
[10:09:52 PM] CompleteZero: 'Notable Events'

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[6:55:21 PM] Robert Joe: What?, you are not Jenna. You are supposed to eat the Stawberries, not people.


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...I was almost worried that you were serious about me being "Her Majesty..."

Anyways, I like how Lunya was in on Ryu stealing her salary, and is suggested to have been taking it...

Just a minor thing, some of the links stayed as URLs.

Also... Dave. That picture he has.

Keep it up, What?!

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Okay next chapter not as many things will go on at the same time. This was only done to introduce the story. So 2.1 and on will be different and more focused.  No worry we will know what happens on the enemy side too.

I fixed the URL error as well

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[10:09:03 PM] Kiri: Gah, What?'s poor spelling is contagious!
[10:09:18 PM] Kiri: It is spreading throughout the lands of Draconis. Soon we shall have an epidemic on our hands.
[10:09:28 PM] CompleteZero: Worse than the banana plague too
[10:09:52 PM] CompleteZero: 'Notable Events'

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[6:55:21 PM] Robert Joe: What?, you are not Jenna. You are supposed to eat the Stawberries, not people.


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http://www.circlever...omics/CVS13.gif

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That's probably a good thing, haha. It's easier on you, too.

Anyway, I'll get to work on a fan story. I'll create the thread for that (and other people's stories) soon, unless someone beats me to it.

... Also, traveling with Rei... I wonder how we even survived this long in the desert. OTZ

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"grumble grumble stinkhead grumble grumble poop-for-snot grumble grumble dick" -Ryu Gaia

"Puhi gave the people food and made the seaweed farm."

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@Patsy GL with that XD!

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The edge of my seat cant even handle me right now, i am literally balancing/levitating myself on the very last line of atoms of my chair, waiting for the next installment of this tale of glory.
Yes.
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Tale of glory, or tale of despair and heartbreak?! Stay tuned!

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"... but you can love completely without complete understanding." -Reverend Maclean, from "The River Runs Through It" (movie)

"grumble grumble stinkhead grumble grumble poop-for-snot grumble grumble dick" -Ryu Gaia

"Puhi gave the people food and made the seaweed farm."

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Relivent

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[10:09:03 PM] Kiri: Gah, What?'s poor spelling is contagious!
[10:09:18 PM] Kiri: It is spreading throughout the lands of Draconis. Soon we shall have an epidemic on our hands.
[10:09:28 PM] CompleteZero: Worse than the banana plague too
[10:09:52 PM] CompleteZero: 'Notable Events'

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[6:55:21 PM] Robert Joe: What?, you are not Jenna. You are supposed to eat the Stawberries, not people.


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http://www.circlever...omics/CVS13.gif

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...Patsy's avatar has the kind of outfit I'd like to wear.  If she's actually wearing that, at some point I should steal the outfit so I can wear it myself.  And thus I'd be Majesty's personal Witch.
Empty until I find something new to do with this space.

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...PATSY DON'T WORRY.

THE SITUATION IS ~COMPLETELY~ UNDER CONTROL.

...aaaahahahahahahaa...we're gonna die
[3:22:04 PM] CompleteZero: Add grammar where needed

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I knew it.

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"... but you can love completely without complete understanding." -Reverend Maclean, from "The River Runs Through It" (movie)

"grumble grumble stinkhead grumble grumble poop-for-snot grumble grumble dick" -Ryu Gaia

"Puhi gave the people food and made the seaweed farm."

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I don't even know if I exist yet.

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[4/17/15,10:18:15 PM] Zack: breathe in
[4/17/15,10:18:21PM] Merc: Merc breathes in
[4/17/15,10:18:32 PM] Zack: and maybe out if you want

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Me neither. It's... interesting so far though.
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Why is everyone typing so small?
Do not worry guys might be seen in the next chapter. It will be a bit longer though. I plan to have every member in it.

Edit: Intro added to all the chapters

Edited by What?, 23 May 2013 - 07:25 AM.

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[10:09:03 PM] Kiri: Gah, What?'s poor spelling is contagious!
[10:09:18 PM] Kiri: It is spreading throughout the lands of Draconis. Soon we shall have an epidemic on our hands.
[10:09:28 PM] CompleteZero: Worse than the banana plague too
[10:09:52 PM] CompleteZero: 'Notable Events'

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[6:55:21 PM] Robert Joe: What?, you are not Jenna. You are supposed to eat the Stawberries, not people.


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http://www.circlever...omics/CVS13.gif

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#37
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Yay for the update! I am content with Tinder's ending.

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"grumble grumble stinkhead grumble grumble poop-for-snot grumble grumble dick" -Ryu Gaia

"Puhi gave the people food and made the seaweed farm."

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I DO exist. I also approve of my avatar.
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I knew you would. :P Too bad your avatar exists in an unusually fitting forum...

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"... but you can love completely without complete understanding." -Reverend Maclean, from "The River Runs Through It" (movie)

"grumble grumble stinkhead grumble grumble poop-for-snot grumble grumble dick" -Ryu Gaia

"Puhi gave the people food and made the seaweed farm."

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I still don't exist. Unless I'm Jigsaw. Which I wouldn't object to.

I'm interested in figuring out why Rei and Patsy would be travelling together, and why Patsy would trust Rei to keep the water.

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[4/17/15,10:18:15 PM] Zack: breathe in
[4/17/15,10:18:21PM] Merc: Merc breathes in
[4/17/15,10:18:32 PM] Zack: and maybe out if you want







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